The Developmental Edit is an in-depth evaluation of how well each core aspect of your manuscript is working, offering a comprehensive overview paired with detailed feedback and suggestions. I analyze Plot/Structure, Pacing, Characters, Setting, Style/Voice, Dialogue, Authenticity, and Wow Factor, providing both big-picture insights and precise, page-annotated comments.

This service allows you to be efficient with your time and budget by tackling high-level narrative issues and finer details in a single pass. My 20 years of editing experience ensure a thorough breakdown of what’s working, where opportunities for improvement lie, and practical suggestions for elevating your manuscript.

With targeted examples and actionable recommendations, a Developmental Edit helps you move forward with clarity, making it an ideal next step before diving into line editing or copyediting. I can also share before-and-after examples from past clients so you can see the transformative impact this service can have.